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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Sundown 0666. Pt 4

@Hymar… I don’t think the subtle insults are necessary. I simply spoke as a reader who did not understand and would not have you on hand to explain anything. No vex ehn? I apologize.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, The Basics Are

Whoa. Didn’t think anyone still read this. Thank you!

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Leaked : A Letter To Mimi

*Clears throat*

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Seun-Odukoya posted an update: You Wouldn't Believe. What I Got Coming. Or...

You Wouldn’t Believe. What I Got Coming. Or Maybe You Will. You Won’t Be Ready. Though.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, A Tale Of Reality

You tried to do something in there. For that, you get a commendation. “I used my hands to make way in the bush. My eyes saw so many absurd images; the grasses were big, long and endless; the sky was...

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, The rush

I like the story. It has promise. However, I think – I honestly think you should rewrite this. Your opening lines already suggested what we were reading, and the climax was just a confirmation of what...

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, The rush

@clemency… You just did. I’m flattered and honored. Trust me, you can do far better than that. Than me. Keep that in mind.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, The rush

@sueddie… I HAve NO Idea what you’re going on about. Indeed – it has been like forever. How goes it?

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Seun-Odukoya posted an update: Saving Dapo - Right Now!

Saving Dapo – Right Now!

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Musings of a Single girl

Indulge me – please. “And that is the problem. A guy will say and do anything to win a girl over. He will change for you all in the name of being a better man. The famous “You make me want to be a...

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, A piece of me

It’s just sweet. Heartwarming. Nice. That too. Well done.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, How I Fell

Stranger things have happened. Trust me. Scarlett? This is beautiful. Brilliant. Sweet. Intense. Well. Done.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, I Heard You

Hmmm. Interesting. Is this about childbirth? Maybe if I understood I’d be able to comment more meaningfully.

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Valentine's Day To Me

The story is… Let me try again. The story is deeply sad and somehow – as though ‘good things are not meant to last”. That said… “I never believed in Valentine’s Day. I still don’t believe in it, […]

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, 1, 2, 3 Disappear: Part 3

The idea is brilliant – as much as we’ve heard these stories I don’t think I’ve actually read one. Kudos. Execution; however could be better. Watch your narrative voice. The story sounds as though...

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, I Met Sam: Part 1

“‘hello boy’’ I was speechless, did not know what to say to the bleak looking lad” Someone who just said ‘hello boy’ cannot…should not be ‘speechless’. At least not in the same paragraph. “‘’No, it’s […]

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, O TI YO! (Drunk)

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe! Interesting. Definitely funny!

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Am I not Beautiful?

One can’t be quite disciplined when critiquing poetry – but I do feel suggested or implied imagery might have made this a much bigger deal. It’s okay as poems go I guess…

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Seun-Odukoya commented on the post, Demons On Church Street: Episode Two

You should space out your paragraphs more, that makes your story easier to read – especially the dialogue. Good job.

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